This is my first legit Fanfic, world. It will probably be really bad, but I'm putting all the trust I have in my insane grammar and writing skills.

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1~ Visitors, for the worst and better

 

 

 

     My life ended when they came. Their ashen due, their smokey smell... Their dead, scarlet eyes.

 

     I suppose the attack wasn't completely unexpected. Greatfa had told my skulk of these 'pleached' foxes. The minds, and possibly the Maa itself could be drawn from innocent foxes and make them belong to someone else. "Who takes them?" I'd ask him giddily as a child. He would just shake his shaggy head, and turn around.

 

     My Greatfa died of old age before we were attacked. He would rather go that way than by a pleached fox.

 

     The attack came and left quickly. In the beginning, my little brother, Ylun, smelled them first. He had only been born a few months ago, but the rest of his litter didn't make it a week. But he, the smallest of the skull, smelled the pleached ashy fufur first.

 

     Ylun went to tell my Greatma, for she would listen to him. She was the most mean and cranky vixen you would ever meet, but She was Ylun's best friend. By time they came out of our den, the pleached had taken Ma and Fa. 

 

     Greatma fought the pleached, at first. Then came an odd pleached one... Their eyes were normal. But then she started to bark like a dog. Bird's cawed around us. Greatma got scared. She wrapped her skinny tail around Ylun in protection. The odd pleached fox but Ylun's neck. He fell at her feat.

 

     "Sansun," She cried to me. "This is evil Foxcraft, these sounds! Run, run!" And I did. I never tried to help. I only wished to protect myself. What a foolish fox I am.

 

     Farther away, I looked back. Greatma wasn't in sight. Fire burned. The place was deserted.

 

     I waited hours, in the woods. I stared at my den, finally going back when the Sun sank into the horizon. When I went into my den, nobody was there. What a strange feeling to be alone, with no home at all.

 

     When I layed down, iit dawned on me that my family was gone. I hhad been in a shock of sorts, unable to think. But now I can. I wrap my tail around me, shivering with nobody to comfort me.

 

     I whimper into my gray brush. I know it is childish, but I am only over a winter old. I'm going to for of starvation. I've never hunted by myself before. My mind melded into sleep despite my racing and solemn thoughts.

 

 ~~~

 

 

     I wake to voices. It was definitely another fox. I sniff the air, but my cave coveres the smell of the foxes. I have no other choice: I crawl up to the entrence.

 

     "This one has already been attacked," said a female, with a sad voice.

 

     "Should we go in?" a make asked.

 

     "Come on, Tao. You know what we'd find,"

 

     "What if someone survived?" Implored Tao.

 

     "I have seen enough corpses for one day. You go ahead: go look around, find another body,"

 

     "I'll do just that," he shot back.

 

     I crawl downwards, into the cave. But Tao, the make, strutted down after me. He walked nose first, relying on smell. Tao stopped, and stared at me.

 

     "Who are you?" he commands. "What are you doing here? You're only a cub..."

 

     My eyes darted around frantically, searching for escape. I sigh, and regain my composure.

 

     "I'm Sansun," I say. "I'm here because it is my home... Well, it was my home,"

 

     "Where are your parents, pup?" Tao asks.

 

     "Dead," I say. "The pleached took them,"

 

     Tao's eyes widend. "The pleached..." he murmured. "Simmi!" he shouts. "Come see this!"

 

     Sunni came down. "What?" she asks, then sees me. Her tail stands up, she's trying to make herself look bigger.

 

     "This is Sansun. She survived an attack," he says. "She'll due alone. We just have to teach her!"

 

     Sunni scowls at me. "Fine. We don't need any more dead foxes,"

 

     "What are you teaching me?" I ask Simmi and Tao. Tao's tail wagged. A flash of pride lot Simmi's eyes.

 

   "Ever heard of Foxcraft?" Simmi asked. My heart dropped. That evil magic killed my family earlier. And now they want me to learn it. Would it keep me safe, or hurt others? I stared at them. I may need them... But is it worth this evil magic?

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's all for today. I'll probably make Chapter two tomorrow. (In doing this because I have a lot of time on my hands right now. I sprained my ankle very badly, and it may be broken. :( Oh well.)

 

 

 

 

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By their ashen due, I meant ashen fur. My phone has really annoying autocorrect.

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I like it so far! Must be hard to type on your phone, I've never done that much on the mobile website. I would've just given up but you kept on going!

 

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Thank you SO MUCH, Creek! :) I detest writing on my phone, but my sister is addicted to our computer. She won't get off. Its probably not healthy. But that's why I'm stuck on a phone.

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Current pronunciation guide:

 

Sansun- Sounds like Samsung, the company. Just with an "n" instead, and the end of the word lacks the "g" sound.

 

Ylun- An odd word, really. The "Y" sounds like "Pie", but beginning with "y" instead. The "lun" rhymes with "pun".

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Chapter two possibly coming later today.

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That was really good! I cannot wait for chapter 2! 

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Foxcraft is awesome!

I heart dragons

Bunnies are so cute!!!!!!

Open a book

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Chapter Two~ Agreement

 

 

 

 

     "No," I mutter, gritting my teeth. "Foxcraft is awful, it just hurts and kills. I want no part of this,"

 

     "Fine then," snaps Simmi. "We'll leave you here, pup, and you can sit and rot," Her tail swished angrily, her eyes stern. "Or, you can come with us and you can learn to defend yourself," she says.

 

     "I know how to fight!" I yelp, being sure my teeth are showing.

 

     "Sure, but what will you  do when the Narral find you? They know Foxcraft, and they will use it on you! How will 6you respond?"

 

     "Narral...?" I remembered the one fox that seemed to be themself when they killed Greatma. What would I do? "One of these 'Narral' attacked us..."

 

    "What?" squealed Tao. "Simmi, we have to go! Now!"

 

    "Pup, he's right! If they know we're here, we'll all die," Says Simmi "Hurry!" Without hesitation, she darts out of my den. Tao followed. I have no choice; I follow them.

 

     We race through the trees, and I smell the ashy foxes. "Guys!" I whisper. They stop and stare at me. "I know you don't care what I say, but I smell pleached foxes," I quivered. Those nasty foxes were too close for comfort.

 

     Tao's eyes darted around. "Follow me," He mouths. We crawl through the trees and brush, and he comes to a big rain puddle. "Roll in it," he says. So I step in the puddle, careful not to splash. After I get soaked, I step out. Simmi and Tao do the same. "Hopefully this covers our scent," Tao whispers. We continue to lope through the woods.

 

     After an hour, I can't feel my legs anymore. "Simmi, Tao, can't we stop?" I whimper. I'm embarrassed to be the first to ask, but they both plopped down on the ground, so I know they need rest too.

 

     "Rest," says Simmi. "We'll talk in the morning," So as my eyes shutand my mind drifted to the world of dreams, I saw for a breif moment my Ma and Fa's face.

 

 

~~~

 

 

     I wake to Simmi and Tao staring at me. "We have a proposition," says Simmi. "If you let us teach you foxcraft, we'll tell you all we know. Which is, indeed, a lot. You may make a difference... Help the Fox Race,"

 

     The Fox Race... I could save my parents! Could information so that? My eyes get serious. I will do anything to save my parents. "I'll do it," I whimper. "But you better be right about this,"

 

     "Yay!" yelps Tao. "We'll go hunt! You can, too."

 

     Simmi looks at her brother, amused by his happiness. "Good then," She says. "Your training starts when the sun is at it's highest. Now we hunt!" Simmi and Tao bolted off, smelling the air. I sinff the air, and turn in the direction of a mouse.

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This might be one of the best Foxcraft  fanfics out there, despite the spelling errors. ;)

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Please keep up the good work! I'd love to see part 3.

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This great! You are good at not righting super fast and making it confusing, but you keep the story going. Unlike me

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@Creek- Thanks. In all honesty, the misspelled words are due to the fact that I can't type well. XD If this were in hand print, it Would be much better.

 

@Well... Everyone- Thank you very much! I try not to write fast paced stories because I know what it feels like to read them. Part three should be out by July 13th. :)

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Well I can't wait to read chapter 3!

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Will try to add Chapter three within the next three days...

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I love this story, its awesome and I e how it's going! Really I don't see a lot of Foxcraft fanfics because I'm just getting back into the fandom, but still. This is great!

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Ve~ Pasta is awesome

WoF, Bearhaven and Foxcraft too

Prussia and I love awesome

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Well, I was gonna post it today. But my parents just came up and said "It's our anniversary! We're going to go listen to a speech from Buzz Alderaan! Yay!". So that's what happened with my life. XD

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XD maple I hate when that happens. But hey, what can you do?

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Ve~ Pasta is awesome

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